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11-12-2009
Eric Siedzikowski
As an accomplished writer,and I sincerely find you to be that,you view things with a higher sense of philosophy,with a deeper sense of psychology.Within this there beams a pensive face
staring through the verses,almost vacuous in facial gesticulation;though,penetrative in almost a glower that forces to proceed with the reading of the piece.Haunting to the kinetic senses that land themselves in the realm of repose.Quite similar to what you the writer may have felt after having written this masterpiece.
Sincerely,Eric
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12-05-2006
Neb Tanner
Wow...I'm actually at a loss of words. I guess because I can kind of relate to it because of current events in my life. This is very well written and the use of vocabulary in some parts really added to it!
Very strong write! Keep it up!
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06-16-2005
Debra Rose
The last verse seems to ramble on a little, but the rest of it is astonishing.
There is one thing that I think was the most interesting but rewarding lesson to learn--
the memories of those who tried to help you, are the ones which keep you fighting the hardest. Only you're able to save yourself, and Delaney...your strong enough to :)
You're such an amazing poet
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