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I often wondered, how many words does it take to paint an accurate and powerful picture of an event. I think I just found the answer! These are macro leaps into oblivion! Powerful words, haunting visions and effective warning! Kudos to you!
I put a little different twist on those heavy rains in my piece called
"Rain"
Rain like a curtain,
Turns dry ground into liquid,
The earth is renewed.
But I like yours too. The same rain, two different endings. It's almost poetic in itself that two people can see the same thing, yet come to different conclusions about it.
I wonder if this is the way it will end? I would rather this than radiation poisoning. This is so strong, with so few words used. Great choice of words, Anthony