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Good-bye
by Jean George
copyright 06-23-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
A tear unbidden
Calls out in futility
Passion clearly dead


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08-16-2005 James Shammas    

Great haiku with healthy ambiguity. Just what does this tear want to do?

Jim
06-28-2005 Jonathon Bywaters    

So many emotions from so few words. I envy your ability to extract in such a way. Thank you...
06-25-2005 Michelle Ackmann    

It's puzzling to think that so much can be felt by the smallest of things. Another great poem Jean! It's incredibly true in meaning, at least for me in the past month which is also part of the reason I haven't posted anything lately. GREAT JOB!!! I LOVED IT!!! I can not wait to read more!!
06-25-2005 Brian Dickenson    

I am full of admiration for the way you write. This has rendered me speechless. Or as they say in Liverpool. 'Gobsmacked'.
So few words, such powerful emotion.
It looks so easy to write like this until one tries it. The effort it takes to find just the right words.
Thank you for this,
Brian.
06-25-2005 David Pekrul    

The passion may be dead, but the longing is still there if the tear is calling out. This shows such anquish, to want something that is no longer yours, knowing that it is not to be, but still wanting it.
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