Just a...Dream
by
Crystal (bunny) Johnson
(Age: 18)
copyright 06-20-2005
Age Rating: 13 to 127
Based on my dreams
You come and go, Why? This Angel I see only in my dreams. Why, I cry! Why do you have to go? I miss you, come back to me!! Please don't leave me!!!! I wonder aimlessly thinking only about the recurring dreams. Not only do you stay a while, but you tell me of who I am and how you know me, at that you tell me why you come to see me. You tell me you love me and then you go. You fly off with the wings of a white dove and with that you blow me a kiss and say I’ll come back tomorrow. Once awaken I don’t remember but with in the day what you showed me in my dreams come all back to me. Your kisses I suddenly feel warm my body all over till the point I can’t wait to fall a sleep again. You taken me places I’ve never seen that Angels only know of. You came to me one night in a hurry and fled early leaving behind a book, says only angels shall read. Knowing me I open it and read it and find out the terrible truth / a rule applied by God : Angels and Humans shall never intertwine with each other or thy Angel shall be punish. Before I wake you come back to get the book and see tears in my eyes now knowing you fate / you kiss me and it’s like the night never end. I a waken from that dream being held in the position I fell asleep in, in my dreams. Arms holding me tight and close to a warm body. I turn to see if you were real / I see you fast a sleep / not only was you there you were human. You awaken and which I wish you hadn’t, you tell me you love me and kissed me / you stand up to leave and I grab your hand and asked you please not to leave / you lean over and kissed me again and said will meet again, then your wings came spurting out of your back and you left. Before he disappeared I said I love you and he was gone. I laid naked in bed, I then stood up to look in the mirror / I did not see my body, it wasn’t my body I use to have but it was my body. I looked beyond my body and saw massive wings behind me. I turn around to see if he was behind me and knock everything of the nightstand. I turn to look in the mirror again, they were still there. I looked at my feet and saw a letter. I picked up and read it. It said:
My dear wife we will meet again. You were an Angel at one point and I will be joining you and your friends in a war. I should let you know you are our Princess. Are daughter will join the fight as well. Love all ways and for ever more
Bade
I wipe my eyes and cleared my tears looked at my hands and saw a silver ring upon my left ring finger. Engraved a moon with a diamond in the middle. My wings fade within my body and it returns to normal and I go out to the kitchen to get something to eat my 2 year old sister automatically took hold of me and my grandma said I’ve been knock out for two days.
This really happen. A dream or not a dream who really knows.
The only proof that I have that its not a dream is that my friends said that they saw some guy with me and described him / what they say he looked like is what he looks like in my dreams, and get this I’ve never told any of my friends what he looked like. My three best friends Kristee, Jessica, and Kayla all said they have seen walking beside me. Its weird and it seems like a fantasy but true / who knows it might be a dream
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Our dreams are always so hard to put into words... they don't occur in the sequence of our daily lives. Study what you write and see if you can put it into the perspective it would have naturally occurred in. Then, once you edit for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and tense (is it occurring now? or was it all in the past? I am, you were.. should be I am, you are for example)
Also, when you change subject, begin a new paragraph. For instance:
"You take me to places I have never seen.. a place that only angels know." should be the last line of that paragraph. The next line talks about a different incidence... You came to me one night in a hurry and fled just as quickly, leaving behind a book. On the cover it read 'For Angels Only'... or so I would have written it. But at last.. it is your story, not mine.
I really do enjoy your story and think you have a knack for story-telling. My criticism is only to get you more involved with the structure so that more people can enjoy your work.
I think I'll take my own advice!
Your dreams are your gifts..Thank you for sharing. I'll be looking for the next one with anticipation!
The praise I have given you is for content..and potential.
That is soooo weird.It kinda sounds like one of my friends but she thinks she can see the people from the Dauters of the Moon book series.Of coarse i don't believe her because i can't see them,and there is a few clues that give it a way.Some spelling mistakes but it's still good.
Quite a few errors involving word choice. Please go over this again, I believe it would be truly beautiful if it was a little more clear as to what you are trying to say. Take care.
Welcome !
