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10-13-2005
Regina Pate
I see it all happening again isn't it, why, over and over like a black and white picture show, I can see the scene and I wait for the credits, I wait, but no it just skips and then start over like it has a scratch in it huh? Why
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06-21-2005
David Pekrul
When a son is a child, the father is often his hero and can do no wrong. But when he is older, others take the father's place. (most often a woman). But he will come around again; a bond first made is hard to break.
Very well written poem, and a pleasure to read.
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06-21-2005
Jean George
I am overwhelmed and very impressed. The narrative of this poem moves so powerfully along...I can almost see the duel unfold before my eyes. Your words vibrate with the anger and disappointment of the father and the pride that will make him carry this out to the end....As I said, I am overwhelmed and impressed...Great!
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