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I think this is a great response to Brittney's poem. I really like the first three stanzas. You did a great job constructing them. Your last stanza contains a few lines that causes the whole poem to come to a halt. "on the reason you got in the game." and "not what your using for a name." These two lines are difficult on the tongue. I could not help stumbling when I read them. Maybe it's me, but I would take a closer look at these two lines, maybe just a slight switching of words can do the trick.
I wish I had thought of this, it is a great topic and you expressed it well. In every walk of life, people put people in boxes. A famous person once said, "I just want to be me, I just want to be free." (actually it was me who said that; I guess I'm not that famous)