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As I Was Sitting Here, Writing
by Lucy Suzume Q. (Age: 17)
copyright 09-01-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
My mind is at a blank now
I'm eager to write something, but I can't
I even just try to think, but I can't
My mind is at a blank now.

I try to speak, but no words come out
I see people walking past me
I want so badly to say "I'm sorry, please forgive me!"
I really tried to speak, but no words come out.

I sense something bad has happened
Something that no one dares to speak about
"What happened?!" I want to cry out
Now I know something bad has happened.....

I remember what it was...

As I was sitting here, writing
The most craziest idea came to me
In a flash, a bloody pen is rolling away from me
I am no longer sitting here, writing.


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Was suppose to be a story, but I turned it into a *cough* bad poem. Heh.


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12-03-2005 Lucy Suzume Q.    

Hi. This is Lucy's younger sister...Lucy is the girl who wrote these poems. I just wanted to tell people that I'm very sorry to say this but my sister Lucy has died. I hope you really enjoyed her poems that she wrote. She wrote more than these, but she didn't put them up. Please pray for her soul.
09-03-2005 Jenna T.    

Cute :) Only one grammatical error..."most craziest" is what you call a 'double positive' and should be "most craziest" or simply "craziest".

This is what getting back to school does to me. I'm sounding like my Language Arts teacher! lol! anyway good poem
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