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My Poems
by David Pekrul
copyright 06-24-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I write lots of poems,
I write them for fun,
Some topics are heavy,
While others are dumb.

I’m only a novice,
Don’t hold a degree,
I write what I feel,
Just trying to be free.

I hope you’re enjoying
The things that I write,
Relax while you read them,
And don’t get uptight.

My rhymes are not perfect,
They have many flaws,
I won’t get awards,
Or expect much applause.

I'll ever keep writing,
I write what I feel,
Please join in the reading,
If you think they appeal.


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02-23-2006 Debra Rose    

I especially like
"I'm only a novice,
Don't hold a degree
I write what I fell,
Just trying to be free."

I think this goes for all true writers.

Imagine if EE Cummings or Gertrude Stein followed the rules, rhymed perfectly, or had perfect cadence! We'd have lost out on the most inspiring literature of our time!


06-29-2005 Roger Crique    

David, your rhymes do not need to be perfect. Your grammar does not need to be impeccable. You can write fur fun, out of love, or because you're sad. That's all well in good. But, be honest with me, knowing what you know, would you feel content if I told you that you've done a great job, even though your fore mentioned errors stand out like a sore thumb? Wouldn't you want one of your peers to point it out to you? I know I would! I think you get my point.


06-25-2005 Brian Dickenson    

You keep doing it. This skips along nicely. It also sums up what we are all about.
Maybe we won't win prizes, but that's not what it's all about.
We write because we need to. Of course praise from our peers counts a lot. That little red 'N' that tells you that someone has taken the time to read our offerings.
Of course the BIG plus is the friends we make and the help we receive. A true joining of minds.
Well done and thank you,
Brian.



06-24-2005 Michelle Ackmann    

I agree with Jean, all of your poems are little pieces of daily life and are wonderful. If we're not real and write what we feel, then we lie to ourselves because life what we make it. Congrats on another job well done David and thank you for everything you do!


06-24-2005 Jean George    

I always think of your poems as little 'slices of life'. Sometimes they make me laugh, sometimes they make my cry and sometimes they make me think. What they have never made me is sorry that I read them......,
Jean


06-24-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You reward is knowing that others love your opinions and ideas. At least I do! Thanks for you David...Canada ain't all bad! Anthony


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