Stuck in the Middle
by
Brittney N. N.
(Age: 17)
copyright 06-24-2005
Age Rating: 13 to 127
I don't know what to do.
I love both him,
and you.
I'm stuck between he two of you,
and I'm just so confused.
I never meant to be here,
between him and you.
When I met him,
I wish I truly knew you.
For if I knew you first,
I may not be here.
Stuck between you two.
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This is a short little poem without much impact. Sometimes, poems lacking impact stand out to me. Most poems are lacking impact, but when there is either a serious lack or a poem is playing at impact I mention it.
So, is this writing from experience? Anyway, you sated your problem pretty clearly but I didn't really feel your true confusion and that sort. Keep writing.
This is truly a dilemma...but you have written a nice little poem that expresses what you feel and I think that the question is answered in the last three lines...sometimes true feelings come out when written down. Good luck!