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Stuck in the Middle
by Brittney N. N. (Age: 17)
copyright 06-24-2005


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I don't know what to do.
I love both him,
and you.
I'm stuck between he two of you,
and I'm just so confused.
I never meant to be here,
between him and you.
When I met him,
I wish I truly knew you.
For if I knew you first,
I may not be here.
Stuck between you two.


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07-14-2007 Leigh G.    

This is a short little poem without much impact. Sometimes, poems lacking impact stand out to me. Most poems are lacking impact, but when there is either a serious lack or a poem is playing at impact I mention it.

So, is this writing from experience? Anyway, you sated your problem pretty clearly but I didn't really feel your true confusion and that sort. Keep writing.


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06-24-2005 Jean George    

This is truly a dilemma...but you have written a nice little poem that expresses what you feel and I think that the question is answered in the last three lines...sometimes true feelings come out when written down. Good luck!



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