11-05-2010
Mae Futter Stein
Hello Leigh,
Sometimes tears just come and it can't be helped.
To lose someone is hard on the ones left behind, but the person gone has no more hurt and is at peace forever. Remember the good times that you were so lucky to have together. Great write.
Always your friend, Mae
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03-24-2010
Emily Valle
This was very dark. But I find that the best things written are from the darkest places. :)
I recently posted my own poem about death, but I liked the way you presented what it's like to be the person left behind.
Very good
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04-07-2006
Euna Park
I feel bad that you're trying to read all of my sad excuses for poems, so I want to try to return the favor. ^.^ Let's hope such darkness doesn't really sink into my brain as well. XD Very good poem, though very dark. Death stealing a loved one away... that really hurts. If you want to get really depressing, write a poem about all the darkness that happens with the poor third-world countries. PLEANTY of dark stuff to write about there.
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03-22-2006
D.j. Feutz
this is good i like it i just got lost at the end... other then that its goodif u can i ould like u to read some of my poems as well and give me feed back on what u think im new so i could use the help
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03-19-2006
Lauren Turner
Oh, this is another sad one. Wow, you are good at writing and you have emotion and fluency to it.
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03-04-2006
Richard Reed Jr
Teardrops are as dewdrops
Falling from a rose
Proving the long cold night
Is over, a new day dawns
Rose and Victoria
Among my sweetest names
Rose has loved me long
Victoria I want more
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02-12-2006
Haley Robinson
Sad. It was well written, and I liked it a lot. It's ok though, you can miss somebody, and don't feel bad if you do, it's ok. But remember all the good times you had with that person, instead of dreading life without them. And don't hold back tears. Holding them back and keeping your feelings bottled up is what makes people miserable. And either way, tears are what make you feel better. I don't know how, but it has some form of chemical that is supposed to cheer you up.
So don't feel bad.
~haley
p.s. This was a great poem.
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10-13-2005
Jeniffer Brand
This was a nice poem. I can relate to it. All to much we have to say good-bye to our little pets we love. But loving them while they are here is oh so important.
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10-06-2005
Eleni Makarios
This is a very pretty poem. It's obvious you are crying over a lost one. There was lots of feeling, and if everyone hasn't noticed from a lot of my comments, I love feeling!
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07-12-2005
Shannon Walter
this was as great peom, but who died? if you dont mind me asking.
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07-05-2005
Jennifer Simpliciano
This is so sad. I'm sorry for whomever you have losted. I wish I knew who it was! But it's a very good poem, nonetheless. Keep up the good work; you're doing a fabulous job.
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06-30-2005
Roger Crique
Hi, Leigh, I must admit that your poem put me in a very sad mood. But I also admit that I was disappointed in the fact that you gave no hint as to whom or what you're talking about. You must give your readers a slight hint of whom or what the subject of your poem. I like to be mysterious when I write, but I include some clues that leads the reader to whom or what I'm talking about. The poem is great, just add a line and explain who died or who is making you cry.
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