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Virgin Tears
by Cortney Jaruzel (Age: 18)
copyright 09-20-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Here I am,
As I feel the world around me,
I'll later regret,
What I've done tonight.

Age fifteen,
And I dare to swim farther out,
Into another life,
Wondering if this is truely right.

My heart feels upside down,
And I feel like a new person.
Knowing that I now can trust you,
And trust the feelings I feel.

I'm laying there,
Wide eyed,
Wondering why this has to ever end,
Disbelieving this night is even real.

I feel empty in my mind,
But it feels so good.
Cherishing these moments,
Until the day I die.

I'm not ashamed,
Nor embarassed.
I'll just lay back,
And to these Virgin Tears, I cry.


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01-28-2008 Megan C.    

O.o That came out wrong. I meant that I wanted to connect with a poem I like so much, not necessarily the specific situation...
01-18-2008 Megan C.    

I... wow... I like it. I can't exactly connect, but I still like it a lot. It's one I wish I could connect with, but I don't... But it's still great. Okay, sorry, I'm kind of ranting on about nothing here. Great work, you're an amazing poet!
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09-29-2007 Frank Fields    

I really liked this poem. Offered gently, without the trauma often seen with a young girl's "rite of passage." I like the soft images and texture that you accomplished with this and the very smooth way it flows. You've told your tale, and told it well. My "salty pen" is pouting in a corner because it couldn't find anything to complain about. Good word choice, development, and still an over-all softness that makes it unique.

Thank you! ^^

Frank :)
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