06-27-2007 Megan C.
Oh, that sounds just like me... It reminds me of Sasuke-kun. Now I wanna cry, this poem is so good! I can't believe how like me that sounds. Mika, I love your poems! Keep writing, please, not just for my sake, but for your's and everybody else on PnP.
Meg C. (or call me Mina!)
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 04-05-2007 Stephanie Quee Stewart
Really nice poem. I understand it completely because it describes me as well. I am always trying to hide my feeling form others so as not to hurt them. Even when I lost my first baby I tried to seem as if it was no big thing; didn't work though cause my man saw right though me. Thank you for sharing such an excellent poem with us and for describing what so many of us feel. Keep up the great work ^_^
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10-23-2005 Lyra M.
Pretty. Just like me...
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10-22-2005 Caitlin M.
This is how I always was when I was younger. In my old neighborhood I'd walk around with a green notebook in my hand a pen and I'd sit on a broken bench expressing my feelings. Nice write.
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07-12-2005 Andrew Findlay
I really know where this poem is coming from. I tend to not show my emotions, even in private when I'm alone. I try to be as 'Vulcan' as possible when dealing with otheers. ('Vulcan' is a star trek reference refering to a race of people who, while they have emotions, have learned to suppress them to a point where they no longer feel them.)Nice poem!-Also, I'm not sure, but I may have spelled 'refering' wrong...oh well...
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07-08-2005 Caitlin M.
Great poem, goes perfect with the title, like it's the best word for it. I'm probably not making sense to you, am I? Well enough with rambling, I loved it!
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07-05-2005 Jenna T.
I've felt this way before; I can totally relate. A person may think another person is, as you put it in this very-well-written poem, "emotionless", but they do not know the feelings on the inside. Good job! Five points for ya
Jenna T.
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07-01-2005 Jean George
You may try..but they are all here in your poetry. Though it is hard, it is healthier to deal with feelings and not lock them away. Writing poetry is a great way of expressing feelings, reading poetry can help do the same...I like your style here and your rhythm.
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07-01-2005 Roger Crique
Emotionless has a lot of emotions packed into it, doesn't it? The word cant should be can't. Hiding our feelings is a good way to protect ourselves or is it? It's okay to cry. It's okay to feel pain. To ignore these feelings is to hurt ourselves in the long run. This poem is packed with emotions and hurt. It is also filled with contradictions and that is how life is. You did a wonderful job, Mika!
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