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Amanda C.
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Glass Wool
by Amanda C. (Age: 17)
copyright 07-01-2005


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There comes a time in every person's life
When it ends
Now is the time for this unholy strife
For it bends
The rules of fate are often changing
Destiny forever rearranging
The bonds of fate will come and go
As Autumn does the distant snow
Will melt will melt will melt away
Into the blaze of every sun which brings the every day
I wonder why I'm even here
This bloody water won't turn clear
Of all the moldy mud and murk
Inside of each a shadow to lurk
Within each heart to keep them full
Break like glass and move like wool


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08-03-2005 Walter Jones    

In the view of message a perfection for youth understands better than the adult, a large pool we swim in. Great writing....Walt
07-07-2005 Debra Rose    

Congratulations! Your work has been featured in "Choices of the Week". Yah, I know...I didn't update for like, two years, but I'm doing it again so... hehe ^.^
Stop by and give the new page a look! And keep up the good work!!!
07-07-2005 Debra Rose    

I'm breathless....

This flow of this is flawless, the visualization is spectacular, and the line about the bloody water not clearing sent a chill through me like nothing else. It reminded me of Macbeth....

Absolutely AMAZING work!
07-02-2005 SamiJo Mcquiston    

OMG! That's so creepy, I just read a poem really similar to this. And you both are so right and so good. This is so well written, nice flow. But I do suggest punctuation. Keep up the good work!
SamiJo
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