For my creative writing class, we had to write a poem like this for any season, preferably summer.
That's why you saw that Tina had a poem similar to this. Enjoy!
Summer is a little girl
that dances in the rain,
who dips her fingers in grape jam
and licks them, one by one.
Summer is that little girl
you see twirling in the park.
All of her clothes tossed to the side,
in one huge messy heap.
Summer is that little girl
who dares to speak her mind.
And dares give her opinion
of what is right and wrong
Summer is a little girl
that wears flowers in her hair.
And strings them up into a vine
and hangs it down her back
Summer is a giggly child
That laughs at everything.
And stares in awe at little things
that you and I ignore.
Summer is a little girl
with hair that's chocolate brown.
Who has the cutest dimpled smile,
that never leaves her face
Summer is the little girl
that won our hearts at birth.
Summer is a little girl
that lives inside us all
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I can imagine Old Man Winter and this cute, little Summer Girl standing side by side. Will Spring be a young woman, and Fall a mischivous little boy, shaking the trees to rid them of their leafs? Strawberry jam is my favorite kind ^-^ Summer definitly is full of energy, and laughter, because there's no school! Freedom. That's what summer smells like, even though it can smell like burning rubber, because of the heat, lol.
A bit of constructive criticism, put capitals at the beginning of the lines. I noticed a few there wasn't. Other then that, it's absolutely perfect! When you've finished all your poems, I think I'll make a picture of all the seasons! What can I say? It's filled me with inspiration :)
Sam
this is Esther
this is a wonderful poem I really like it it's a
dream that I had a freind that is the best
that the freind is you and you are a good freind
uspecialy that your my sister
Using a little girl as metaphor for summer is very original and your descriptions are amusing and can't help but make the reader smile. . There are literally thousands of poems about summer and yours is one of the best ones I've read...keep writing!
I love this, it's so descriptive and unique.
And it's been awhile since I've commented on one of your writeings Paula. Love this, wouldn't change a thing.
I think this is sweet, fresh and true, like summer! Summer is the warmest of the seasons and when everything comes to fruition. All little girls should be what your poem is, beautiful, giggly and so, so, pure! You did a wonderful job describing the child in all of us! Hopefully, that child will never die....
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