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There's A Difference, Mr. Barnes
by David Pekrul
copyright 07-07-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
In reference to your question,
Mr. Barnes, Mr. Barnes,
I think you need to learn
A little charm, little charm.

Its very rude to ask one’s age,
You’re either dumb or very brave,
But that’s another question,
Mr. Barnes.

You say that I look lovely,
Mr. Barnes, Mr. Barnes,
You say that you’re not meaning
Any harm, any harm.

Don’t think that I believe your lies,
I’m not some bimbo, I’m a guy,
So watch the things you say there
Mr. Barnes.

Now what is that you’re saying,
Didn’t know, didn’t know?
You’re feeling kind of stupid,
And so low, and so low.

See a Doc and get some glasses,
Learn to tell the boys from lasses,
Then you’ll know the difference,
Mr. Barnes.


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07-21-2005 Leah Garrison    

this is hilarious! I love it! and I especially love the way you used the rhythm from old minstrel shows. (I got visions of "white christmas" in my head...)
great job!

=^.^=


07-13-2005 Debra Rose    

CONGRATULATIONS David! Your work "There's a Difference, Mr. Barnes" is one of the winners under Adult Members in Choices of the Week!

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07-09-2005 Roger Crique    

Now, this is interesting David, I normally associate the word, "bimbo," with a woman. Now, "stupid," is more of an adjective for us men. But, what can I say? Any way, I must confess to you that I find this poem rather, "interesting," no pun intended! The structure, the subject and the repetition of words and their employment are a bit unusual, in my opinion. I'kind of confused by this piece. I don't know how to praise it, so I won't.


07-08-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Maybe it wasn't a mistake, we are living in different times. You sexy thing( I have never had that opinion of you before)Anthony


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