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Raise Me Up
by Andrew Findlay (Age: 37)
copyright 07-08-2005


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  Raise Me Up
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I got lost in the dark again
I need your soul to guide me
I failed to be pure again
I need your forgiveness to save me

Pick me up with your kindness
Lift me up with your smile
Raise me up with your purity
Take me into your light


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08-28-2005 Sam Hackel-Butt    

Just one smile can brighten anyone's day, but sometimes we do need that hand to break through the dark and save us when we're too far lost. Great write, and please, write more poetry! You're very good at it.
Sam :)
07-09-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You should try more poetry, you are good at it! This is a very lovely poem and I enjoyed the read. Anthony
07-09-2005 Roger Crique    

This is something one would see inside of a postcard, simple, direct and to the point. I would work around the last line, Andrew. It some how does not seem to fit with the rest of the poem.
07-08-2005 David Pekrul    

This sounds like a prayer, simply, but beautifully written.
07-08-2005 James Shammas    

I like the lighthearted tone of this, contrasting with a more serious beseeching to a love one for guidance.

Jim
07-08-2005 Jonathon Bywaters    

I am onl;y just starting to realise alot of the values you show here. Great work.
Jonathon
07-08-2005 Debra Rose    

This is a beautiful work. Sometimes, not all of us manage to be as pure as we should, but somehow, we'll be all right. We make it in the end.

Wonderful work, Andrew.
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