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03-05-2011
Mylinda Rives
"Multiple Person"
Your artwork really opens the wording of your poetry.
What a scary and insightful warning when she appears to be a bloody mess.
Dark and foreboding lines really makes this poem jump!
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09-12-2005
Lauren Turner
There is a dark side to a lot of people, You can express that through poems.....
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08-15-2005
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
I love this one! I can relate to this and I think everyone can. I changed a lot in september to november of 2004... But, that is not the point! The heart on the pic is a little nasty. But the pic is verry fitting. Dark is what I think you are best at!
Leigh
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07-20-2005
Jenna Tramonti
I love this...everyone has a side to them that no one is ever able to see. Luvs it!
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07-16-2005
Paul Kangas
I think everyone has parts of personality that nobody knows about... This was a very good write! Loved the pic for it 2!
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07-14-2005
Jean George
I very much like the style of your writing and I like your subject. We all have multiple sides to our personality, some keep their 'other sides' well hidden, some won't even admit to themselves they have another side, but it always seems to be the younger crowd that is willing to sometimes explore the depths of their personalities. I remember my own days of fascination with my so called dark side when I would ask questions much like yours...Very good writing.
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07-12-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Part of me doesn't work. You must be open with someone that you love. If you don't let them see all of you they don't really know if they love you because there is more than they know. If you build a relationship and then let the cat out of the bag, it may make them leave. So its better to get it out at first and build the relationship with ones that accept you for who you are! We all are different, but there are so many people out there that you can find someone that is a lot like you are! Good luck, Anthony
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