Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

 Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID
password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Kim Adolfo
Jack Curson
Robert Betts
Jordan Screws
Mohd Azzmi
Frank Fields
6 Writers

Terrie Bridges
Aline Saito
2 Free Members

8 Members
33 Guests

I can not
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 07-14-2005


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
(haiku)


Oh, you're going away.
What can I say to stop you?
My tears can not speak...


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry

Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

07-24-2005 Stephen Washam    

A wonderful Haiku. It is difficult to write this form and make it mean something and you did a great job with this. Take care and Have fun. Steve
07-17-2005 James Shammas    

Great, great use of apostrophy in this neat haiku! I can really sense the extreme frustration of those tears, which go so unnoticed to the one that they're directed at, yet speak volumes to the the reader. This is what poetry should be-- an economy of words, loaded with experience. I love it!

Jim
07-15-2005 David Pekrul    

Oh, but tears can speak, and they can speak volumes. This style of writing suites you. You do it very well.
07-15-2005 Brian Dickenson    

Sixteen words in three lines and you have written a love story. Amazing!
To realise that English is not your first language only impresses me more.
You have a rare talent, never stop writing.
Brian.
07-14-2005 Jean George    

Irina...this is very well written, your meaning is clear and the English is perfect. Congratulations, I know you worked hard. As usual, you very delicately express layers of meaning with a perfect choice and arrangement of words.
Jean
07-14-2005 Roger Crique    

This is very touching. Our pride sometimes gets in the way of our words and when we need to say something, we pull back and say nothing at all. "He's leaving, I want to stop him, because I don't want him to leave, but if I say something, I will give into him, so I'll say nothing and let my tears speak for me!" You said all of this with just a few words. Very nicely done!
07-14-2005 Debra Rose    

This speaks so much with so few of words. This is amazing, Irina, in it's simplicity but it complexity. Amazing.
Visitor Reads: 380
Total Reads: 402
Comments: 7

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:


Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats