I Want To Know You
by
David Pekrul
copyright 07-17-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Do we really, honestly know each other?
living in the same house,
eating our dinners together,
raising a family,
and working at our jobs?
What is your favourite colour?
What is your favourite meal?
Do you like it when I tell you you're beautiful?
or do you just think it is something
that I feel obligated to say.
Why can't we let down the barriers,
be honest and open,
letting our feelings really show?
Oh, God, I want to feel like we are one,
sharing the same thoughts,
the same feelings,
the same emotions,
the same dreams,
the same desires.
You are my life.
I am nothing without you,
yet we live in isolation,
separated by our own passions,
dreams and desires,
no longer connected like we once were.
Let us bring back the innocence,
the passion, the wonder,
the lust,
like it was when we first met,
Unable to get enough of each other,
always wanting more,
never satisfied with one day,
but wanting eternity.
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My wife and I swore we would never be like this. We made an oath to each other to talk every night for atleast 5 minutes before bed, and we have done just that.
People change, I know Rachel has sinc we met for the first time over a year and half ago. By talking we let each other know what is going on and how we feel.
I hope that you two can become perfect friends again.
Unfortunately people don't take the time to get to know one another. This is not only reserved for the young, but we older people also do this. In our desire to not be alone sometimes we do and say what is expected and not what we truly feel. As time goes by we continue to do this and it becomes standard. Later you realize that you have nothing in common anymore. The solution is easy....each night take a 30 to 45 minute walk with your significant other. You both need the exercise and you have nothing to do but talk. No radios or CD players, just you two and your true feelings. Talk to one another and keep those lines of communication open. Love is like owning a house. Work a little everyday or a lot on the weekends, but if you do nothing it will start to get old and fall apart. If you love someone let them know everyday like its your last, it might be! Anthony
I know exactly how you feel. There is little worse than realising one day that you are living with a stranger.
It's happened to me, as it has happened to millions of others.
I think it's a case of evolving, we constantly do this, when it's in the same direction. That's good.
But when it is in opposite directions, that's when your world can fall apart.
I don't think it is anyones fault. It's just being human.
Brian.
You know, it's amazing how intimacy really has nothing to do with physical distance. I must learn from those who remain "close" and yet are always at odds, and those I sense have a true spititual bond.
I liked the piece, but did not feel it as rhythmic as your others.
SO many times we're afraid of the end, of our passion dying, that we bring it about ourselves. It's so easy to forget our love for one another, and what's most important in the relationship--our trust and devotion to each other. This is such a beautiful, but sad plea. Wonderful write
Welcome !
