What I'm Afraid Of
by
Esther T.
(Age: 9)
copyright 07-17-2005
Age Rating: 4 to 17
what I'm afraid of is
spiders mosquitoes
what do I do
please help me I'm doomed
I need to think, tell me
what shall I do?
I'm going to burst
tell me please, what shall I do?
mosquito bites bee bites
I NEED TO GET THROUGH THIS
I NEED TO, I REALLY DO
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hey esther, this poem is really cool and cute. I'm also afraid of spiders, they sacre me half to death. I hate mosquitoes becasue when they bite me i start to rub them and they get bigger and bigger! oh, and a really good tip when you're around bees is to wear calm colors, don't wear anything orange or yellow, it will atract them eevn more. Oh, and the color that mosquitoes are most attracted to is blue, so I feel sorry for cops! =)
This is cute and all but you did not use capitals. And Hate all bugs too, but if'ya don't like'em don't garden or get a crust till your 12. Bugs will haunt you other wise. Cute poem and spelling is better now. Keep writing.:)
Me too, I don't like bug bites. I'm terrified of spidars and bees! I cry when one gets too close, heh ^-^;; How about I help you with the spelling and punctuation in this poem? Just send me an e-mail if you'd like me to help you. :)
You will, Esther, you will get through this! a little bit of mosquito spray will help too! It's okay to be afraid, just don't forget to do something about it! Lovely poem, Esther!