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Love Sick
by David Pekrul
copyright 07-19-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I'm waiting for my dying day,
When all the pain will pass,
This sickness has the best of me,
And I don't think I'll last.

It crept inside my very soul,
I didn't see it come,
It happened when I saw your face,
I couldn't even run.

I always knew that you were there,
And didn't pay much notice,
But just the way you looked that night,
It set my mind in focus.

And now I'm very sick in love,
They say there is no cure,
For love that stabs you in the heart,
I'm dying, that's for sure.

You wouldn't even look my way,
And though I tried my best,
You looked at every other guy,
And went out with the rest.

So now in pain I slowly die,
And hope it soon will come,
So I can end this misery,
And to this death succumb.


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07-20-2005 SamiJo Mcquiston    

Nothing is so hard as to ignored by one that you love. This is just beautifully expressive. I love it. Keep up the good work.

SamiJo
07-20-2005 Christopher Carlson    

This is a great poem that walks hand in hand with my poem I wrote as a senior called "The Dance". Unreturned love is the most painful and it a disease that can cause a person to go crazy.

Watch for my poem and let me know what you think.

I loved this poem!
07-20-2005 Jonathon Bywaters    

Having been in love but oh a few times and yes had my heart broken or not even acknowedged i "love this".
Maybe im too much a romantic.
Thanks David.
Regards
Jonathon
07-19-2005 Jean George    

What age are you writing about?...This sounds like the horribly painful throes of that first unreturned love of adolescence. I would not ever want to relive those anguished years and it sounds as if this poor soul is doing exactly that! Well written poen, though.
07-19-2005 Rene Laris    

I love this. This is my kind of Poetry!!! Excellect!
07-19-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I told you that you should shave, she is probably afraid of bears! If she knew your heart she would be in love. I know your heart and I still love you, anyway! LOL This is a sad truth for the shy and reserved!
07-19-2005 Brian Dickenson    

Methinks a lucky escape. She went with ALL the other guys. Well, what can I say. Maybe love is blind.
But David, I'm fairly sure this is not about you,,,,,,,,lol.
Brian
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