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Unimpressed
by Cortney Jaruzel (Age: 18)
copyright 07-19-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I'm living this world, day by day,
Twisted in thoughts of stupidity.
I realized, that living in this world,
Is trying to live in acceptability.

But no matter what, no matter when,
People will always be the same.
And If I try, If I fight,
I might soon win this life game.

I've got my family,
I've got my friends.
And I'll always try my hardest,
Even if I'm alone in the end.

I'll put on a smile,
Show how strong I can truely be.
Even if I feel worthless sometimes,
Even if life happens so abruptly.

So, tonight when I'm laying down,
Laying my head at rest,
I'll remember that this pain is life,
And I'll always be unimpressed.


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08-27-2007 Leah G.    

I love this piece! you have a very unique writing voice. i like the style and choice of words. your rhyming was excellent. If you were to edit this poem, i would add more detail to why you are unimpressed with life. the pain will eventually leave, and things will get better. excellent poem. write more- I'll be reading it!

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07-22-2007 Leigh G.    

Nice! I really like this piece! I like your comparisons and choice of words. Trying to be strong for others when you don't really feel like being strong is something I've done many times. I really like this piece, because in a lot parts I feel like I've been in similar situations. No errors in site, great work on this one! Keep 'em coming!


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07-21-2007 Brittney N. N.    

Very nice. I like how you express how you view the world here. I couldn't find any spelling or grammatical errors, and the flow was very nice. Though, to be honest, I think the fourth stanza threw that flow off just a bit. Keep up the good work though.
~Brittney~
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