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Touched by the Fire
by Sam Hackel-Butt
copyright 07-26-2005


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
Touched by the Fire

The angel kissed the little child’s forehead before whispering a soft prayer of sweet dreams to chase off the things that go bump in the night. The little boy, only four, with sun burnt cheeks from too many hours in the hot, summer sun without taking heed to his mothers words to wear a hat. You seem to know everything at four, and yet, nothing at the same time. Those charming red ringlets of hair nestled so sweetly and tenderly trapped between his cheek and cowboy inspired pillow. Soft eyelashes rested easily, the scraped knee from tripping over the rocks at the brook forgotten as peaceful sleep prevailed.

Why the angel lingered, he did not know, but the boy seemed to rest very easily, unlike other boys his age who were restless in their sleep, tossing and turning with pent-up energy waiting to be burnt in the next, hot humid summer day. Ever since his birth, the angel had arrived every night when he was put to bed. From diapers, to the diapers he wore now to keep himself from wetting the bed and ruining the mattress and sheets, he watched him evolve. From the night of his first nightmare, he wept for him as he did for his mother, reaching out in the darkness until the flame of a candle appeared in the door, and his mother, dressed in a soft, gauzy nightgown came to sooth his worries. He wept, for he had failed to protect this small blessing.

A blessing, a child is, with a face carved of porcelain, tender, soft, and wonderful to gaze upon when they sleep, because they don’t dream about the things adults dream of. Purely innocent until school begins, and the traumas inflicted in the unprotected world can be too much, even for the angels softest voiced prayer. The hardships this little boy will endure, especially one so gentle, and quiet, a bully’s prime target. How much this angel wanted life to be perfect for all his children he kissed goodnight, and prayed for, but he knew that someday, his prayers would be overthrown by the corruption this child will experience. And even then, the flame of his mother will never touch the darkness surrounding the small red haired boy. No one can save someone from corruption.

Sadly, the angel stole one more loving glance at the boys face, illuminated by a soft, orange light from a night light not far from the bed before leaving the room. He was counting down the days before this tiny gift will lose his innocence, and never be touched by the fire of safety and comfort again.

***Inspired by the poem on Toni S' author page.***




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04-22-2006 Judy Meeker    

This is good writting! You are good at this. I enjoyed reading. This held my interest.
May God bless,
Mrs. Tigran Israelyan


08-29-2005 Euna P.    

Oh wow.
This is really sad.
wow
wow wow wow wow
this is really good
expressing the joys and sorrows of a child and comparing them to real life
that's a good idea


07-31-2005 Paula T.    

beautiful.....
this work is just...so touching
can you imagine, angels staring over all of us, crying just as much as we did over every pain, every misfortune.
boy, my angel must be sobbing more than anyone right now
wonderful, just beautiful



07-28-2005 Brittney N. Nasca    

wow this was a very intense poem. It's very good though. I love it. Keep up the good woork ^_^


07-27-2005 Jenna T.    

How sweet! I love this! Keep up the excellent work, Samantha!


07-27-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This was very nice to read and the descriptions were written great. The story grabs your attention and holds it throughout the read. Thanks, Anthony


07-27-2005 Jane L.    

This is such a sweet story.


07-27-2005 Nancy Pawley    

Even angels from heaven cannot protect us from the trials and tribulations inflicted on us by an uncaring world. Heartfelt story that I loved, Samatha.
Nancy


07-26-2005 Kat Voletto    

I really, really loved this piece. Even though you were talking about dark and nasty things that I remember (and still have nightmares about...) I felt safe. As if the love of the angel was touching me too. Very, very good work. Please, keep it up. And thank you.


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