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Please note, Rene, that the comments are about what you write not how you write it. I can only say that what you write about is always the best. How you write, your verse form, your rhyme scheme is flawed. But then we have tallked about that. It is only with a rare poem, will I comment on form etc. This is a nice poem. Continue to put your poetry in. I'll wait until I see one I would like you to edit into a true verse form. For now, this is good. Auntie
Abraham Lincoln once said, "change is the only constant thing in life." Change is what we are. We are constantly evolving, whether for better or worse. Your poem expresses this thought unequivocally. You have great lines and great flow.