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Change
by Rene Laris
copyright 08-03-2005


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I know I really want to change,
and to myself be true!
I have found pursuing this,
is not an easy thing to do.

I have tried to identify,
and figure out my past.
Yet, today is all I have,
and I want to make it last.

"To thine own self do be true"
I've heard that said before.
I'm learning to believe,
that's the key to unlock the door.

If your truth comes within,
you'll know it's from your Heart.
Don't give up, don't give in.
What a better way to start.




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08-10-2005 Deone Wiley    

Please note, Rene, that the comments are about what you write not how you write it. I can only say that what you write about is always the best. How you write, your verse form, your rhyme scheme is flawed. But then we have tallked about that. It is only with a rare poem, will I comment on form etc. This is a nice poem. Continue to put your poetry in. I'll wait until I see one I would like you to edit into a true verse form. For now, this is good. Auntie


08-03-2005 Roger Crique    

Abraham Lincoln once said, "change is the only constant thing in life." Change is what we are. We are constantly evolving, whether for better or worse. Your poem expresses this thought unequivocally. You have great lines and great flow.


08-03-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

There are many keys and many doors. You seem to be headed in the right direction. Keep up the good work, Anthony


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