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Adam's Sin
by David Pekrul
copyright 07-28-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
He said I shouldn't do it,
But I did it just for spite,
I knew that I had wronged Him,
And I couldn't make it right.

Now there I was in Paradise,
Quite naked in my sin,
The Father came to visit,
But I wouldn't let him in.

He said, "Where are you Adam?
I would like to have a talk."
But I was in the bushes,
Hiding out behind a rock.

He said, "What have you done, my boy?"
"Have you been picking fruit?
I told you not to do that,
So I'm giving you the boot."

But God our Father loves us,
Though we're often on the run,
And that is why He rescued us,
By giving us His Son.

He took responsibility,
For all the pain we cause,
And loves each single one of us,
In spite of all our flaws.

If we will just accept the gift,
Of God's eternal life,
We'll leave this world of sin behind,
And live in Paradise.


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03-09-2006 Toni Sweeney    

This is a really good poem. The poem helped me understand Adam and Eve's sin a bit more. I'm going to have to read some more of your religious poems. It probally will help me understand the bible a bit more. I only have been going to church for a few months and I'm still confused about alot of things.
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07-28-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

That is the promise. This is your gift. You do love God. I get the drift. Your poem was much better! The subject is one of the best, too Thanks, Anthony
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