My Dear Friend
by
Brittney N. N.
(Age: 17)
copyright 07-28-2005
Age Rating: 13 to 127
My dear friend,
I miss you.
But I don't know
if you miss me.
My dear friend,
I care for you.
But I don't know
if you still care for me.
My dear friend,
I love you.
But I don't know
if you feel the same.
My dear friend,
I cry over you.
But yet
you still ignore me.
My dear friend,
I want you back.
But I fear that you hate me
and will never forgive and come back to me.
My dear friend,
I need you.
For I still love you
with all my heart.
But I don't know
if you love me too.
For you act as if you hate me
with all your heart and soul.
So clear this up,
my dear friend.
Do you hate me as much as I love you,
or do you love me as I do you.
Please answer me truthfully,
my dear friend.
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Heh heh...I have had few experiences with relationships of any kind, but I do have experience with the kind of love a person feels toward a friend. Even though, I never thought of friendship-love as so tragic, mainly because being a loyal friend usually can make a person care about you, too. Good work on this piece! Keep it coming! I liked the flow, and I didn't spot any errors.
Another beautiful tear-jerking poem. I liked the way you used the repetition with "my dear friend".
It was a smooth easy to read poem with lots of emotion. The more I read of you're poetry, the more I want to read.
Sadly yes I got my answer a while ago but... well let's just say it wasn't a happy response. Oh well... I guess that life, ne? Thank you all for commenting on my poems.
have you got your answer yet? Usually we already know the answer we are just trying to get some closure. I am sorry to see anyone have to go through this but it will get you to the one you really love, who will really love you back. Good job. Thank you
This poem is very lovely, but you could make it much better by not repeating your main point. My dear friend is repeated too often. It doesn't help to do this. It would be interesting to see how it would look without all those, "my dear friend," Try it, you'll see what I mean.
How could anyone not love someone so sweet! This was nice. There is a few places that slow you down while reading and one typo, but I found this a pleasure to read. Thanks, Anthony
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