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This is really sad. If this really happened to you, just remember, there's normally someone else very close by who can comfort you, and no matter where they are, they can help. You decide whether you want to wallow in self-pity or accept the help that would help you heal.
Anyway, this was a really good poem, but I think you could really improve if you used some more descriptive words and used some more punctuation. Just a suggestion.
This is a great poem...Just to point out, in the second stanza; last line:
"All you thought was about her"
It's grammatically correct but I personally think it would sound better if you said
"All you thought about was her".
But it's your poem, not mine :) Remember, the relationship you lost with this person will only make you stronger inside.
This is a very hard feeling to experience. All your dreams about the person vanish with the attention that they give to another! Good little bit of prose. Anthony
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