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To have the sea for a soul
by Sage B.
copyright 07-30-2005


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  To have the sea for a soul
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A heart neglected,
Hidden behind a lie perfected,
Through her eyes a sad soul found,
Inside her a sea never sound,

At night she overflows,
By day it never shows,
Today she found her heart again,
It slowly begins to mend,

Tonight the tears will cease,
And the ever rumbling sea decrease.


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08-26-2005 Roger Crique    

I thought I had commented on this poem before, but I don't see it, maybe I thought I did. Any way, here it goes again. In my opinion, the only thing standing in the way of this poem is its title, it is too long. Otherwise, this poem is as beautiful as the picture credit itself. This poem has a wonderful flow to it, great imagery and great subject matter. At the end of the poem, you stressed that the heart is healing, this is good for mankind! Great job, just shorten the title, it takes away from the beauty of the poem. A short poem and a long title is awkward.
07-31-2005 Jenna T.    

Very nice poem. Good work!
07-30-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Its hard to go on when you feel all is lost, but then you will find something better and all will be forgotten. Good luck, Anthony
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