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The Guardian
by David Pekrul
copyright 08-01-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Hiding in the shadows,
The Guardian stays alert,
It watches every move we make,
Disaster to advert.

It watches all the things we do,
And listens when we say,
"I'll make the rules that suit me best,
And do it my own way."

And then when we get out of line,
The Guardian rears it's head,
Attacking with such cruelty,
Before we are mislead.

A sword it pierces deep within,
And there it stings and bites,
And brings us to submissiveness,
Although we try to fight.

The Guardian is our Conscience,
That speaks when we do wrong,
It sends a message to our soul,
And tries to keep us strong.

But some have killed their Guardian,
Their Conscience they have seared,
They wander helplessly through life,
Their way becomes unclear.

Be thankful for your Guardian,
It wants the best for you,
For when it seems you've lost your way,
It always sees you through.




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10-12-2005 Regina Pate    

OK I don't know how to explain this but this is what I think your conscience and your sub conscience and your subconscious are three different things, you can loose you conscience, it becomes dulled, and then non existent, and you will still live, we all know what our conscience is and this is our guide, or should be, but then as we are guided, we then decide what we think, and then what ever we think, good or bad, our sub conscience then reads our thoughts like a computer program and then it gets to work to try and follow that program but in our subconscious lives our soul, witch is one with God, and if we listen to it, it will speak to us, and will lead us to our destiny, our soul purpose, the more we try to hear this the more we will hear it and the easier life will get. We are not our bodies, we are souls on a mission, how do we listen to our subconscious which hides our soul, we connect the hard wiring of our hearts with the soft wiring of our brains through our fingertips. Make sense. Anyway if you want to know more you can email me otherwise this was a very good write it inspired me to write this I couldn't help it I am sorry but you asked aye. Thank you

Gina


08-01-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I have seen many that have lost their "Guardian."
I wonder how they live with themselves after what they have done. This makes one think...good write! Anthony


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