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Imagination
by James Shammas (Age: 44)
copyright 08-04-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Since I could walk at four,
When I jumped from bed,
Touching foot to floor,
A hand would grab it,
Pull me under
And leave me sundered.

It doesn't stop-- this thought--
And at forty-four,
I am still so wrought,
Pausing over floor,
A foot suspended,
Scurrying off upended.

Stuck behind this rift,
I often wonder--
Given such a gift--
Who made millions to lose it all,
Or built whole cities
To watch them fall.


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08-06-2005 James Shammas    

I forgot, too, that the "older hand" could also represent yet another form of power: parental power over a child forced to stay in bed, just when he learns to walk!


08-06-2005 James Shammas    

All right, all right, but please don't nominate me for the most eccentric, psycho poet at P-n-P!
Here goes: This boy has a silly, crazy obsession in bed that is, in fact, powerfully self- destuctive (In the end, he resides behind cold walls-- a prison? or asylum?). This is also the kind of power that can spark one's imagination to create, for example, movie producers and celebrites (they have power to influence us, as well as power through fame and money), and also make monarchs and kings (obvious personifications of power). This power, though, can ultimately be negative and lead to all sorts of destruction, as implied in the poem. In fact, all symbols of power must ultimately fall.

Please, I'm not mad, though maybe Hamlet is getting to me a bit!

Phew!


08-06-2005 David Pekrul    

The poem is interesting. I have read Roger's comments, now I'm also curious. Could you put a small note here somewhere and let us know who you are talking about. Just a clue; please?


08-06-2005 Roger Crique    

After a brief explanation by the author of this poem, I was able to link all of the variables in this psychological masterpiece. I'm so sorry that I couldn't figure it out on my own. Thank you, James, for bestowing some of your wisdom upon me and for allowing me to peer into the mind of a great author. Now that I understand the poem, I find it to be one of the best poems I've read that deals with the man and his mental limitations!


08-05-2005 Roger Crique    

I believe that most children have a fear of being grab by a monster and pulled under the bed. The title of this poem is, "Power," and I'm trying to decipher the relevancy of it. In your last stanza, I'm not sure if you're asking a question or making a statement, so it's difficult for me to grasp the meaning of this poem. I believe that there is more to this poem than what you are relating, but only you know that, since you do not provide enough clues. And whom ever says that they understand this poem is either truly gifted or I am utterly ignorant!


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