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I think that's the first time I heard you say shit, I have never heard you curse before. I'm glad that you did, because somehow it lets me know that you are a real person and not one of the untouchables, I try so hard to reach. I don't know about your peom, you know you did a good job, I'm sure you had a good run, and life is better, and so is the wheather, but I don't care, I must say it again, I was hooked from the beginning to end, great write, good job, thanks,
Super metaphor on he twin towers. Excellent is not good enough.
The good with the bad, the right with the wrong, pain and pleasure two sides of the same coin.
What does it all mean?
The more we ask, the farther away we get.
I would have commented earlier, but first had to see how other interpreted your work. Like always, you write well, but always over my head. But keep it up. Your poetry keeps me thinking.
This poem brings with it a powerful and scary vision of what we human beings are truly, a species of animals that seek to understand what the purpose of life is. For some reason, it took me a few seconds to figure out the majestic steel bird, but what an mental explosion it caused in me! The fact that you made it a point to mention that it was a "God-given day," makes a lot of sense. I can't speak for God, but I'm sure he was aware of what was going on and in life, to save a thousand, sometimes ten thousand must be sacrificed. I can go on and on, trying to justify why I'm giving this piece 10 points, but because I can only give it five, I think I'll cut the chatter and do just that! Outstanding work!
You did what you intended, for this piece provokes much thought. I believe people watch and read these stories of pain and death so that their private hell does not seem so bad. They sit back and say to themselves," Those poor people!" and all the while secretly thinking I've got it better. Wait a minute...your the head doctor! You are supposed to have all the answers! LOL Nice write Jim. Thanks, Anthony
Well observed. The human race in general is in love with violence.
We make hero's out of people who are very violent, like boxers. We pay to see someone suffering.
The more gory the film, the more people watch it.
We watch car racing, not for the skill of endlessly going around a circuit, but for the crashes that inevitably happen.
The more bad news a newspaper prints, the more copies are sold.
It begs the question. 'Gods children'
Brian.
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