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04-04-2006
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Very good! I've decided that I'm going to read and comment on all of your poems that I haven't already and I thought I'd start out on your first. This is a very creative idea! You know how me and the darkness get along, but I still really enjoyed this. The message isn't completely blunt, which I like and I like hope to see more soon. You should capitalize the start of each line, and if you read it over you'll find a few grammar errors. They're the little ones. :) This is a cute poem, mixed with a few other emotions. Keep writing!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
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08-12-2005
Kat Voletto
This is a truly wonderful piece. I'm not surprised that it came from someone young... though it seems sad that you have already tasted this bliss and have already lost it. Either that or you are just incredibly observant. Either way, my hat's off to you! Bravo! Looking forward to seeing more. ^_^
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08-10-2005
Jane Lee
>.< This is soooo good. I wish i had ur talents and ur brains....
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08-09-2005
Roger Crique
This is absolutely beautiful, "unto the mouth of babes...." and so Jesus' quote goes. Such wisdom from the mouth of a child! Addictions can be damaging and as the old cliche goes, "Too much of anything is no good for you." Adam tasted the apple and the rest is history! This poem is compelling, for its message is clear, its imagery is vivid and it flows very freely. Great job, Euna! Considering your age, the message and the quality of your work, I must give you a five!
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