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Power
by Euna P. (Age: 15)
copyright 08-16-2005


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Think of how much power a grain of sand has
when thrown somewhere.
It's not that much.
Now think of what happens when a sandbag is thrown.

Think of how much power a drop of water has
as it falls.
It's not that much.
Now think of what happens during a tsunami.

Think of how much power an ant has
when carrying something.
It's not that much.
Now think of what happens when there is a whole army.

Think of how much power a lone wolf has
when trying to bring down it's prey.
It's not that much.
Now think of what happens when the entire pack is there.

Think about the similarities of these things.
Standing alone, there is not much power
seen in our eyes.
Then they band together, and what happens?

Perhaps we can learn from this
and how to cooperate
if we pay attention to little things in nature
for there is much to be learned from them.

The lesson to be learned is this.
Alone, we are weak
together, we are strong
but always stand for what you think is right,
even if you stand alone.


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04-07-2006 Leigh G.    

Another great poem. You're getting very good at writing about the chain affects and the importance of recognizing more about your surroundings. The comparisons are great, and aside from a few grammar and canalization flaws, this is a very good poem! Most of my early work is...well, it scares me at times. :) Keep writing!

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders


10-10-2005 Eleni Makarios    

"Wowza". This is amazing, Euna! It shows you like to analyze things. Good job! I'd like to read more works similair to this. Keep up the good work.


10-09-2005 Erin G.    

OMG! Euna!

This is awesome, I loved the way you had a bunch of examples. great job! There is one typo, instead of phrahaps, it should be perhaps. Other than that, awesomeness!

~Erin


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