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*sets her political beliefs aside for hardcore analysis of the poem* your poem conveys a real passion for the subject, truly an admirable poem ^_^ I would work on rhythm and meter, but other than that a great piece ^^
Mary,
I wish I had been as coherent after the attacks as you have proven yourself to be. In my youthful vigor, my pain, my fear, I demanded we rush to arms, destroy all and hand the empty lands to Isreal. If you can't tell I'm raised Jewish. (Now Jewish/Pagan/Buddhist/whatever else I qualify as O.o )
And you know...I believe you would like a lot of Dali Lama (sp?) quotes. One from a calander of Buddhist words of wisdom in the office at work says: "We of the world are a global community, and therefor have a duty to treat each other as such."
And the question of good or evil inside...there is both conflicting sides within us, but to question and search is the first step...to admit the second, and to change, the third. Another quote from the calender? "We can change; our ultimate nature is pure."
It is refreshing to hear as open of a mind as yours, especially on such a matter that arises such thoughts of hate.
I'm humbled not only by the number of the responses, but the depth of them as well. Thank you so much for taking time to read and respond so wonderfully to my work. I'm glad I've touched a chord here. It's nice to know I'm not alone in my views at times. As far as others being paranoid about me (Nan) I can see it some of the faces staring at me, especially at an airport. Without my make up and if my hair is straight... the Filipina and Cherokee shine thru proudly... nationalities that unfortunately get mixed right in with other "darker skinned" races (which btw, should not be judged for that sole reason anyway!!!).
I've seen people from India being harassed by the public since 9-11 and it shames me to think I belong to the same human race that's so obviously bigoted, racist, and rediculous at times. People from India had NOTHING to do with it, especially if they were born HERE! And further... MOST people from Pakistan and Aphganistan didn't either, just a small handful.
It's good to be cautious, but paranoia is something else all together.
Ok, I'm sure I've rambled on enough. I'll step down from the soap box now.
An excellent write Mary, one that I agree with.
It is in the hearts of many that one day there will be total peace and harmony in the world, I hope that that day comes soon. Life is short enough without violent people causing death.
Mary, there are so many good people in this world and this tragedy has shown us courage, love, fellowship and caring. Sometimes we go along in a rut, complaining over little things that are almost inconsequential. Suddenly, the world collapses under our feet, it can be a world disaster or a personal disaster. Hopefully we learn to live more fully, love more deeply and give more easily. Distrust will be a terrible consequence, but perhaps it will be unescapable. I say a little prayer that all the goodness shown by all the wonderful people will help everyone to get through the terrors and face the world of tomorrow.
Welcome !
