Jenny And Carroll
by
Tina Z.
(Age: 15)
copyright 08-15-2005
Age Rating: 7 to 127
Jenny and Carroll were stuck in a desert. They had nothing to do but talk to each other.
Their conversation went as follows:
Jenny: Hey Carroll, how do you think I値l die?
Carroll: Dunno.
Jenny: How do you think you値l die?
Carroll: Dunno.
Jenny: Where do you think I値l die?
Carroll: Dunno.
Jenny: Where do you think you値l die?
Carroll: Dunno.
Jenny: Come on, at least imagine something!!
Carroll: Ok, fine. Do you REALLY want to know?
Jenny: Yes.
That was how Jenny and Carroll died.
Explanation:
Carroll was annoyed at Jenny, so she killed her, and just as she was killing her a poisonous snake bit her, so they died at the same time.
A lesson to be learned to all, never annoy your best friend or you don't know what she'll do.
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So, if she killed her, then she's a pretty crappy best friend. I didn't know what to except from this but I didn't really except....this. Well, it's not half bad in the long run. You could of added some descriptions and fix grammar. Keep writing, you'll improve on writing stories...
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
"a poisonous snake killed bit her,"
should probably be "snake bit her".
This makes me laugh, especially because of the other comment left. Yah...me and my old best friend used to threaten to kill each other all the time. It's so true (especially between girls) how often we get annoyed and wish we could kill one another. But then again...who would we have to share chocolate with, talk about dumb girl stuff, or complain about that one guy, LOL
This was a little dry and I had a problem brushing the sand away so I could read this. I was left wondering the same things as Debra. Is this really a poem or a story? Anthony
hold on, i think I get it!!!
jenny was annoying carroll, so carroll killed jenny and then died of dehydration.
right?
hey, it reminds me of the relationship I have with my friend tina.
i annoy her and -
wait a minute!!
clear this up and I'll give you 4 points.
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