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My Mountain
by Roger Crique (Age: 52)
copyright 08-16-2005


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
You mock me from afar
And when I near you, I cannot climb you
Is your summit virgin?
For I would like to be the first

From my window
I have learned to love you
Since I was a child
I have admired you

And now that I’ve grown
I would love to conquer you
I would love to go up your skirt
And reach your climax

Many a men have died in vain
For they could not reach your heights
They got lost inside of you
But I’m different, I will conquer you!

And if trying I shall die
Let it be as I descend
for my heart could never take
the thrashing of your waves




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09-07-2005 Regina Pate    

why? And don't ask me why what
08-17-2005 Rene Laris    

Challenging not only to climb, but to get over the feeling of anger and frustration of seeing without experiencing the excitement of the challenge.
08-17-2005 David Pekrul    

Unlike James, I like to read this one-dimensionally; that it in fact talks of a physical mountain, such as Everest. Describing it as if it were a woman is a nice touch, like describing a ship as a 'she'. I'm sure much more could be read into this, but I like the mountain story all by itself.
08-16-2005 James Shammas    

Boy, I see a lot of conflicting, yet very real admixture of emotions, here. I see the desire for plain sex, mixed with need to feel this as power and domination. Yet, I also see an honest vulnerability and weakness, the main character shrinking from the anger of the person he so desires. This is an honest, frank piece of writing.

Jim
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