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World side Crisis
by Alma H. (Age: 15)
copyright 09-24-2006


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  World side Crisis
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I have an uncle living in London.He has been living there for a few years now.I don't think i ever met he.He works in the financial district.He was at work before the bombs went ka-blowy.He's not hurt or anything,I just worry about him when things like that happen.


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10-02-2006 BJ Niktabe    

I would worry, too, if I had a family member in a place so near to disaster. I'm another that's glad he was unharmed.

Aside from the spelling error mentioned by Tammy, you forgot to capitalize your I in "I don't think i ever met he."

Also, you should put a space after each period and comma. And I'm not sure if it's an actual word, but I think I would have used kablooey instead of "kablowy." Just a thought. :)
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