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Hold Me Tight
by
Jane L.
(Age: 14)
copyright 08-20-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
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To me sadness is,
The clear white smile on your face.
Smiling brightly.
Even if time passes by,
And all my memories are frozen.
I can only see you.
Let's pray...
The sadness of the song
I couldn't reach...
It's working it's magic now.
Quietly behind my back,
It piles up like snow.
The sadness that I couldn't bear.
Let's sing...
You would know that mind.
Hold me tight.
I never knew that it would end up like this.
The heart of mine that loves someone.
Does it have to hurt so much?
I love you.
My tears won't stop,
Even though I know that it's too late.
Probably if I didn't know you,
I would think that,
Someday I would forget.
Let's dance...
In my sigh filled with sadness,
Again my tears,
Fill the world with a white fog.
Inside my closed eyes,
Can I not hide my hurt heart?
Hold me tight.
Let's pray...
Someone told me,
Rather than hurting love.
The thing that hurts more is,
Only loving to themselves.
I miss you.
I only want to see you.
I want see you again.
Let's sing...
Can I bury the heart that wants you,
And throw away another one?
Hold me tight,
I never knew that it would get to this.
The mind of mine that loves someone...
Does it have to hurt so much?
I love you.
My heart hurts so much.
Even though I know that it's too late,
I still want to meet you.
I want to meet you again.
Hold me tight...
I love you...
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04-30-2007 Leigh G.
I really enjoyed this piece! You've got one extremely wise sentiment in this poem that stands about all the others too,
"Someone told me,
rather than hurting love.
The thing that hurts more is,
only loving to themselves."
You told a beautiful story here, and the lack of capitalization in some places hardly bothered me. I also liked the "Let's pray...", "Let's sing...", and company because that gave the poem a song-like feeling. I admit to being chicken s#it in the department of being unable to say "I love you" to a person's face though... I said, "wo ai ni" which is "I love you" in Chinese, and it took me more than six months to say it in English. Even though I said it a little indirectly. -.- Anyway! Great work, Jane! Keep writing!
Leigh of the Commenting Community
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04-02-2007 Megan C.
That is so beautiful! It reminds me of Sasuke... Okay, now I'm getting off track. Really beutiful poem. I loved it, and read it over and over again.
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07-21-2006 Kimberly Murphy
One word describes it all........BEAUTIFUL!!!!! OMG!! I'm amazed again!! Truly beautiful!!
Kim
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08-27-2005 Andrew Findlay
This was truly a lovely and very beautiful poem. I don't know how you can write so accurately about such things at your young age, but you certainly seem to know what you're talking about.
Great poem!!!
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08-24-2005 Mika L.
T.T Such a nice poem....
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08-24-2005 Kat Voletto
Holy cow. This is a beautiful, beautiful piece! I loved reading it, then my jaw hit the floor when I went back up to check your age. The only thing that saddens me is that you know this pain and you are not even a teenager yet. Please, do keep writing, keep smiling, and take care. A wonderful write!
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08-22-2005 Kimberly Angelone
I am sad reading this. I know what you are feeling. So hard, love.
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08-21-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
This sounds like love. Thoughts going everywhere, all different, all the same. Loss is rough, feelings linger. Hold me tight...I love you... need I say more!
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08-20-2005 Roger Crique
This is scary, really scary! You kids are beyond your years! I am not going to speak to you like I would speak to any typical eleven year-old child. You are not typical. Your poetic mind is racing past the checkered flag and it is scary, but fulfilling to see such maturity. This poem is so well written, so balanced and beautiful that I'm not going to brake it down like I usually do. I will let other readers enjoy it without my input. I will just tell you, Jane, that this poem has (in my opinion), all the elements of poetry that makes a poem stand out from the rest of the pack. You are a true poet and possess the poetic energy that lives in the heart of all authentic poets. Congratulations!
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