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Darien Rafael
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 08-22-2005


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There you lay barely a few hours old,
All wrapped up and ready to hold,
Hands together and eyes closed,
You're exactly what we were trying for.

Darien Rafael you've been named,
Everyone looks amazed,
He's so big, and he looks just like me,
But we'll soon see.

An experience to remember,
You sleep just like Daddy,
And eat like him too!
But you're an angel a smile to people's faces.

We're home now,
You're settling in good,
Lots of sleep and lots of food,
And lots of changing too!

One day I'll tell you the story,
I was playing a game when you decided it was time,
Daddy rushed home and to hospital we went.
The whole night we waited and the next day induced.

"He'll be out by ten tonight",
At 4:26 you entered the world,
amazing the doctor,
And making me happy it was over.

Darien,
Mummy and Daddy love you,
We're going to do our best,
Never forget that, you're our special one.


*Born 13th august 4:26pm weighing 3 1/2kg and 51 cms*


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08-23-2005 Emily Garwood    

Lol Debra yea i was gonna post a pic to go with the poem but its too large and uh im not good at shrinking and all that
but i will try and get it done soon promise
Emy
08-23-2005 Debra Rose    

CONGRATULATIONS!

How sweet! You need to show him this when he gets older. And what an utterly gorgeous name. Darien Rafael...hehehe. Are you going to post pictures? I'm sure he must be gorgeous, if he takes after you ^.~
08-23-2005 Emily Garwood    

Imeant Mummy thats how we spell it in england we'll or the way i've always spelt it lol thanks for your corrections i'll sort them now!!
08-23-2005 David Pekrul    

Congratulations, Emily. Your life will never be the same again (but that's in a good way of course)
08-23-2005 Roger Crique    

Well, congratulations Emily! I'm sure it was an experience that will remain with you for the rest of your life. There was a certain poise that you were able to keep throughout the poem. I sense you being careful here, not to overly narrate your experience. I noticed this. Did you mean, "Mommy," or did you mean to say Mummy precisely? Also, in your third stanza, it should be, "people's faces..." and in your last stanza, "Mommy and Daddy loves..." Over all, it this is a beautiful tribute to Darien Rafael. Congratulations once again.
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