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Angel from Heaven
by Rissa T. (Age: 17)
copyright 08-27-2005


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Angel from heaven
hear the fallen tears
the boy you sought to save
is telling you goodbye

She drops slowly
descent, graceful
to see the stains
upon the unmade bed

The cries of anguish
she enters still
kneeling beside him,
she caresses his face.

Her golden white robes
drenched in the life
Forever she will mourn
For her love, now lost.

She holds him still
never to let go
the cold, dead body
of that soft hearted boy

She stands now,
his torn flesh in her arms
She carries him with her
To go back to her haven.

She flies to the edge,
seeking His mercy
to give this soul
A life to live.

She lays him down
in the water by the bridge
bathing him of blood
remembering what she's seen

She see's him suffer
the pain of abuse
the pain of poverty
the pain of hunger

She feels his emotions,
the depraved
the unwanted
the missunderstood

She bathes the wrists
the blood never stopping
She cries, holding him to her
Trying to wake him

She never did accept
the fact that he was dead
She see's him
in every person who passes.

She calls to them,
Seeking him
People gawk and stare
The angel

The angel
to earth has fallen
feeling the mortal
emotions and pains

She never has heard
the voice of "God"
though she will
Always hear her boy
whispering in her ear.


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10-16-2005 Tiffany Forster    

Wow, I really enjoyed this. The imagrey is really good in this as well as the overall flow. Kudos to you! THe only thing I would recommend is keeping the grammar clean. THere is no uniformity or need to have commas and period randomly at the end of the first line and fourth line. Not a big thing, just something that I noticed(Yay grammar freaks). Good job! Keep it up!
Cheers!


08-30-2005 Roger Crique    

This piece is truly evocative and passionate. The wholly images are grand and heart-moving. Your depictions and imagery are truly engaging as is the fluidity, which is uninterrupted and smooth. This is truly a piece of excellence and I commend you for it! I recommend everyone to read this.


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