My wings are bound to me tight
I wish to fly but can't
Fly away to my one world
I am ready but no one believes me
So who is right?
Them?
Or me?
I still want to fly
Be free of the chains
Fly into the sky to hover into the distant winds
Fly away
Take a chance
Break away
Now can't break the chains now
But I will
I will make my wings stronger
So I can break away
I will break away
I will fly
I will spread my wings.
So I can fly away into the winds to dawn.
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This is a good poem for hope, and sometimes people tend to forget that they're only human, and they can't do everything. But you can work towards goals, and become stronger untill you can achieve it. Great job!
It's easier to break your chains than you might think, even if it involves cutting off your feet with them.
"My wings are bound to my tight" I believe you mean "me" not "my". Keep up the good work!
I think you mean, "My wings are bound to me tightly." In your fourteenth line, you wrote the word, "now," twice. You need to clarify that line. This is a very nice poem about freedom. We all want to fly, to soar, freely, without any restraints. I think you convey these yearnings very well and with lots of passion. I think pretty soon, you will be on your way, flying high above and enjoying your freedom, in your imagination of course!
Hmm...your wings are bound to YOUR tight? The first line.
But this is how I feel. Just to be above the clouds and fly free without any chains of homes or family or friends. That is...I could have those chains at will, not forced on them. That's life I guess.
This is a good poem. It makes people think a little. I can feel my wings' struggles against unseen chains, and some rust from the chains hurting me. But the fact that I still HAVE wings makes me keep trying. More of this sort please...they make me happy, however depressing the subject is.
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