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Consumption Part 1
by Sage B.
copyright 08-31-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Consumption Part 1
Picture Credits: I drew it

Her soul is consuming her heart,did you know?
She's becoming emptier.
Can't you see it in her eyes?
Her soul thirsts for blood,Escaping through her eyes.
An unseen phantom,begins to feast upon porcelain flesh.

She is alone.
There is no hope in sight.
She was always alone.
So she created him,Pouring bits of her loving soul into him.

He is the only person just for her.
The only one to understand.
The essence of a loving soul.
What she needs to be drawn back,to be refilled.
He can save her.
But he will sacrifice what makes him living.
Can he make her happy and whole again,but still be loved as a lifeless doll?

To be continued.....


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09-01-2005 Roger Crique    

I think the imagery here is excellent. You have written very eloquent lines and they flow very nicely. I can't wait to see the rest. Very nicely done. You have some run on sentences that lessen the impact of some of your lines. A few periods and commas should take care of that. Otherwise, this is a very melodic piece of poetry.
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