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I like this poem alot. It has a mysterious aura, and its extremely well written. I love the line
"Smile, no one will know." Was sooo awesome! Other than a few typos, it was perfect. I love it...great job! Keep up the good work.
This poem is full of emotion. I love it. Might I suggest the typos be fixed? Despite our Greek heritage, Anna (^.^) we can use the dictionary! I use the dictionary and ask my mom! :-) Good job though. This is one of my favorite poems.
I think that this is a wonderful, melodic, expressive, intelligent, realistic and awesome poem! You have some wonderful and refreshing lines here, such as : "Thin ice of empty promises Will brake with spring water," I think you meant, "break," but in this instance, I think either word could be used. You also wrote, "My mirage flows over me, And i flow with wind." This is a beautiful and unassuming line. Capitalize your "I." But in my opinion, this is the killer line, "And in crowd you will say me "hello", Smile, no one will know." This is an awesome line! On your last line I think you meant, "Mirages, they are so beautiful..." Now, what I find interesting about your last line is that mirages do disappear right away, but some people choose to live a life of mirages, thus they last for years....Despite a few errors, I will give you a five, because whether you believe it or not, this is one of the best poems I've read so far!
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