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~Hidden Grandfather~
by Jeniffer Brand (Age: 38)
copyright 07-02-2008


Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
I loved you and believed in you with all my heart!
But you broke that trust and tore my heart all apart!

You helped and raised me when I was first born.
But with your evil actions that now has been torn.

You were my whole world and everything in my life.
But you chose your daughter, seperating her and your wife!

I trusted you and now my life will NEVER be the same!
You used my Mother for your purpose, pleasue, AND some game!!

When you died, I prayed for your soul!
For you being in Heaven was my only goal!

I felt bad not saying I loved you and carried that for years!
But finding out who you were and what you did only brings me to tears!!

Thank God you didn't hurt me more than I already am.
My life is hard enough without you, believe it if you can!

You son of a bitch, be lucky your dead!
Cause if you were alive, I'd have your head!

I loved you and mourned you for way to long!
But what I know now...please...poof be gone!

I loved you so much, your death was so urging.
I hope the time in Hell will be much deserving!

You son of a bitch, I hate you now!
I hope the devil has you fucking a cow!

Know the grief you caused between grandmother, mother, and daughter!
The seperation only causes pain, hurt and emotional slaugher!

R.I.P.
Look what you did to me!


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09-03-2005 Roger Crique    

To me, life is like an airport. Some of us land and some of us depart. We come here with different baggages and agendas. How we deal with the cards that we are dealt, depends on how adept we are at traveling through this airport. The use of foul language is distracting in a poem, but in your case, it's understandable, for I don't know what your grandfather did, but I can only imagine. And I know that it has taken a toll on you. Time heals all wounds and hopefully, you'll heal in time. I think that in one of your sentences you wrote, "pleasue," as opposed to, "Pleasure," It is very difficult to forgive someone that has hurt us, at least for me, but trying can only bring one inner peace and outer happiness.


09-03-2005 David Pekrul    

I don't know what to say. As I read through this piece, you seemed to get angrier and angrier. I think Anthony has said it all. Try to find peace within yourself. Be your own person; don't let others actions destroy who you are.



09-02-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

What to say, I am sorry that life has dealt you this hand. Anger does not help you for it keeps you at bay. Try to forgive and it will be easier to go on.This will be hard given the circumstances, but he is gone and your anger has no place to fall except the floor. Life deals cards that we don't want or understand, but you must do what you can with what you have. Don't let someone else's mistakes hold you back. I love your work, therefore I love you, because your works come from your heart! Anthony


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