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I like this and can totally relate to it. I lived with my best friend for almost two years and we totally got on each others nerves for I don't know how long. this is a very good poem, but i don't understand why you picked Manson for the pic, but it doesn't matter what I think of the pic...keep up the good work here.
omg, this made me die laughing. How true, how true. It's a good friend who you can look at and say "Dude...I really need some breathing room, because you're seriously starting to bug me" and have them understand. I love this poem, I just don't see why you chose Marilyn Manson, except that when you're around someone who plays his music 24/7, you really do wish they would go away. But the same goes for Spear Brittney, and all those other pop annoyances, lol
the only things that get on our nerves about other people are what is really long with ourselves. The more we are around someone the more we start to look like them. Inside and out. Either you like them or them like you and you never noticed it before either because you weren't like that before or they weren't. Don't try to get rid of the person or stop looking in the mirror. When your hair is messed up do you fix the mirror? -No you fix you hair, and then what happens? The mirror has no choice but to follow. Right? I don't know maybe i am projecting.
I ditto Roger's comments on this one, Anthony. I'd like to see you embellish this poem a bit; get into the very meat of your thoughts. I think you have a lot to say.
Hmmm...very interesting...The more one is around someone else, the more one begin to notice their flaws but sometimes we also notice their abilities. I think you have a lot to say but you're holding back as well. I feel little tug of the conscience. It could be that this pest that you refer to is too close to you. Some of your sentences are a bit awkward. "Sometimes all us people..." This is an unusual sentence. "But sometimes are sometimes..." though I understand what you're saying, it does not sound right. This sounds like a Yogi Berra quote. You've seen his commercials? I don't understand the use of the forward slashes. In this line, "Sometimes are ment to be alone," meant is misspelled. This is an incomplete thought. And on the same sentence, I think you are missing the word (we), between the words sometimes and are. Again, I feel that you really have something to say here, but for some reason, you pulled back, you probably thought about it too long before you posted it.
So very true. It's just sad how so many people take it the wrong way. It's a shame how we usually notice the faults so quickly! I noticed a small typo: Pests are around to much. To should be too.
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