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One Simple Step
by Erin G. (Age: 14)
copyright 09-26-2005


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Take one step,
One simple step,
It makes a world of difference,
You can move, at long last.

First your right foot,
Then you’re left,
Alas, you are walking,
Your first few steps.

A feeling of joy,
You can finally move,
No more crawling around for you,
One obstacle gone,
With another on its way,
You will overcome it,
In every single way.

I’ll tell you my secret,
The secret many fail to find,
Joy comes only to those,
Who take the time to look for it,
Those who look in the deepest,
Darkest recesses of Earth,
Will find the power of joy,
In the smallest things.

Take one step,
One simple step,
It makes a world of difference,
You can move, at long last.

A poem I wrote, after seeing my cousin's baby boy walk with his shoes on for the first time. He was sooo cute, and he took so cute steps, they were so big because he wasn't accustomed to wearing shoes...I'll never forget it...he was so adorable ^_^
I don't know how or why this poem turned out the way it did...


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06-23-2006 BJ Niktabe    

Oh, DUH!! I forgot the praise! lol
06-23-2006 BJ Niktabe    

There is nothing more precious than a young life. It amazes me how they imitate and learn. That first step is the all important first of many! And to be a part of that is such a blessing. I remember my daughter taking her first step, and I was lucky enough to have a camera in my hand.

When something you write evokes memories such as yours has, then you know you've touched someone with your writing. You have a talent that I'm glad to have found!

BJ
10-21-2005 Walter Jones    

Is it the eyes or the heart that sees, the poet feels with the soul, this is a great write.. Walt
10-04-2005 David Pekrul    

Watching a child learn to walk can teach us a lesson in life. Whenever you are out to accomplish a great thing, it is easiest down by taking baby-steps.
There are many layers to this poem. Well done.
09-29-2005 Jenna T.    

Awwww, how sweet ^__^ I remember when my cousin learned to walk...she was so proud of herself! This is a very good poem. Excellent work!
09-27-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Its funny we want our children to walk so bad that we try to get them to do it all the time at first. We try to get them to talk for the first year and try to get them to be quiet for the next 17! lol This is a very nice poem and worthy of the choice of the week! Anthony
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