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Duty and love. (Chapter 1)
by Anna Tkachenko
copyright 09-05-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
The figure of man in the cloak appeared behind the guards of the Moon Palace, they didn’t look to see anything as the man went toward the rooms of the princess. Stranger looked like he knew the palace, his steps was sure where were he going. His cloak flow together with darkness then he run ahead to the trees in the front of princess's rooms. He looked at the big windows and saw the princess. Here she was sitting in her room in her royal dress, writing in some book.
'Here are she is, I was hoping she was here, I think she is writing in her diary.' this is the first thoughts of stranger 'Isn’t she gorgeous? Perfect golden hair and bright blue eyes, even this weird ponytails is perfect on her.'
Stranger called her by her name and with hope she will hear him he went out from the darkness. It was tall young man with black hair and blue eyes. His was wearing armour and black cloak. In his hand he was holding a rose.

*Serena*
I was in my room then I heard someone calling my name from the outside. I opened my balcony door and saw him my only and true love, he was holding one red rose.
"What are you doing here? My mother will hear you! Go away!" I said.
"Not before you listen to me," he answered and in one movement he was on the balcony "Serena, we can go away from your mother and all this that keeping us apart."
"I can't." I whispered "This is my duty, I am really sorry, but I can't do this to my mother or to my kingdom."
"This is not your kingdom yet! It is your mother's kingdom!"
"But it will be mine kingdom soon as I will married with Earth Prince, you know it well, my love."
Two sapphire blue eyes stared at me as I was trying not to cry, "I know it," he said quietly "But you never had seen him before, how do you know that you will love him?"
" Only thing I know in my life is that I love you more then anything in this world and I will never forget you and certainly I will never love anyone else." then I said this words I felt the tears falling on my white dress and my whole body shaking. I saw that Darien was looking at me in amazement. He made few steps toward me and hug me. «Don’t cry princess everything will be OK." I shook my head "No, everything is so wrong, I am so tired of all this, I just wishing that I wasn’t princess, I wish you were my future husband and not this Earth Prince!"
"Serena where are you?" I heard the voice of my mother and I just felt my heart breaking, "You must go now, please hurry, she can’t see you, and go please." I said in fear. "OK I will go, but not without kiss." then he said that he kissed me and in one moment he was gone, only that had left of him it was red rose in my hand.
"Ah, here are you, what you doing here all alone in the middle of night, dear?" a lady with silver hair and in white royal dress asked me with smile.
"I was just looking the stars, mother, aren't they beautiful?"
"Yes, they are, my dear. Especially tonight."

*Darien*
Then I was moving away from the palace, I saw one men and two horses deep in the forest. I went toward the man with brown hair; he was looked a little bit worried. "Darien you are late!" said Malachite and his brown eyes looked at me with anger. "I am sorry my friend, but it is difficult to enter in the palace without someone to see you." I response
"Yes, I guess so. But if you was not playing you little game with the princess it would be much easier to get in the palace, I mean like Earth Prince." with this words he gave me the leash of the white horse.
"I am not playing any game with her; I just wanted to know her better before wedding. I wanted her to love me like a person, not prince!"
"Yes I know what you saying, but do you really think that she will forgive you to not telling her truth about your self?"
"Yes I think so, she loves too much to not forgive me."
"Did you propose her to run away like you said you will?"
"Yes, and she said no." I smiled then I said this words. Malachite was looking at me, “I do not understand, did you want her to say NO? Why?” he asked and at the same time he put on a helmet of the armour he was wearing.
"I wanted to know if she will be a good queen who knows her duty."
"And?"
"She is just perfect for me." with this words I sit on the horse and start to moving ahead without word, in few seconds Malachite was behind me on his black horse we silently took our road to the home.

To be continued......
[Oh, well this is the end of chapter 1 of my first story, please tell me what you think and thanks for reading my story. I will be continue soon as i can. ]


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10-02-2005 Mary S.    

It's Perfect! I love it so very much! Can't wait until you get the next one up here!!!!


09-26-2005 Toni Sweeney    

This is a really great story. You did a good job for English not being your first language. I can't wait to see what will happen in the end. If you need help with the English you can always email me and I can help you so the story will be a easier read for everyone.
Toni Sweeney


09-25-2005 Jenna T.    

Great job on this, considering English isn't your first language!!! Awesome job!!!


09-16-2005 Kat Voletto    

I too enjoyed this bit, but it was very difficult to read. I very well understand English not being your first language. I look forward to seeing what you come up with when your grasp is better on the grammar. I'm glad to see someone else putting Sailor Moon stories out there that DON'T involve zombies! (J/K Andrew!). Keep up the good work.


09-14-2005 Andrew Findlay    

I think this was an excellent effort, especially since English isn't your first language. I also speak french, but I doubt I would be able to write nearly as well in french as you do in English. The plot is interesting and I will definitely read the next chapter. The only obvious problem is the grammar, but I think that will improve greatly as you continue to write.
Sailor Moon is cool!!!


09-06-2005 Alma H.    

That was great.Such a original idea,like me with Lita's story.Also with the language but it was still great.


09-05-2005 Eleni Makarios    

GREAT JOB, ANNA! Despite the fact of our language, you made this into a story! EVERYPNE can see it now! It's very good, too! I can see why it was published! Might I suggest www.m-w.com for help with grammar and such> I also read many American and English books. That helps me improve. Good job! :-)


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