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P.S. I Love You Too
by Regina Pate (Age: 29)
copyright 10-10-2005


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  P.S. I Love You Too
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Wandering Through a thousand ruins
Remembering all these forgotten druids
Walking around in a world abound
Land of the dead On a coffin I bled

Sitting up against a witch's casket
ants eating up my homemade basket
I brought you a gift
but before I could get here I shed a tear

a tear that I was holding back
to hold the tears I held for years
My tears collected were
more than the lakes and the seas and the oceans erected

And I cried all over my gift for you
And I ruined my life I thought I knew
I'm drowning in a pool of blood
I'm dying in a sea of love

This is a nightmare,
I can't wake up
I don’t want this,
here take my cup

I broke that cup that was my mother
I lost that cup that was my daughter
I seek that cup that is my son
My younger son's cup runs over and yet I spill none

And my youngest son,
his cup I pass
Now my son he's not,
but is at last

A mother's pain,
a twisted knot
A Child's heart,
a broken pot

He said, "my heart hurts",
"I'm so confused."
Now he's crying
What do you do?

Your mother is holding your baby in her arms
Do you see her now?
What did she say?
She said let us pray

Now they're praying,
their hands entwined
They pray you make it,
their house you find

And now he's smiling
and wipes his tears,
and he believes and has no fear
because he believes in answered prayers

Go now, don’t speak in vain
Defend your child while you still can
How long will you lye there,
lye in sin?

My heart is broken
in four pieces
and split apart
by my two nieces

Where my child goes,
I go also
But which child should I go to?
Which apostle?

Go to him Dear Mother, of mine
This is Korbin, I'm doing fine
I need now, I really do
but I will wait until you're trough

Hurry up,
before you spill my cup
P.S.
I Love You Too


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05-11-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Another haunting and sad song in which your voice pierces my heart like death-ray laser beam.
I feel broken.

Good structure, beautiful words and heart-felt sentiments.

Rich


10-11-2005 Amanda Guthrie    

Yhis almost seems like a eloquent riddle (of which I am not good at solving) but there is something there to be solved I think.
I like this one very much you did a wopnderful job Gina.
Amanda


10-10-2005 James Shammas    

This is gut wrenching, and I can feel the emotions chargng straight toward me like a freight train. It just doesn't stop! I think there are one or two typos, otherwise I will give 5 stsars!

Jim


10-10-2005 Sage B.    

It starts of kinda funky but ends well..I still have the question mark though..*confused*


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