Daddy's Little Girl
by
Regina Pate
(Age: 29)
copyright 05-09-2006
Age Rating: 1 to 127
Picture Credits: http://www.marchofcrimes.com
Oh my little girl whose so sad so sweet
For to see your face would be such a treat
Oh why little girl do you cry over them
Will you tell me who made you cry this time?
Was it Billy, maybe this time Sara?
What did they do forget your birthday
Or just forget
Nobody believes in that anymore sweetheart
I’m sorry
When are you going to wipe those tears
Haven’t you learned noting I taught you
Okay come here sit on my lap
Give me your coat take off your cap
Calm down its okay, your not going in there today
Who made you go under the bed
Were the monsters out yet
Did they twist your words inside your head
Where are you going you’ll get lost in there
Alright go in the closet if you dare
You always want to go in the dark
You think it is just a walk in the park
You run around and go hiding behind trees
But you get lost and scream get me out of here please
You like the dark its normal to you
But when you can’t see you don’t know what to do
You like the rain but you get lost in the flood
You like the cemetery and think its so scary
You laugh and giggle and think it is just another mystery to uncover
But then your terrified and streak in horror when it’s a fresh grave you discover
You say on thing but you do another
You say she’s a whitch but you love your mother
You ask me to help you then go back in again to explore
But it doesn’t change it is always the same as before
Listen I can tell you stories nobody knows
I can tell you how the story goes
Those fairy tale stories are all the same
Same story different name
Once upon a time in a not so far place
Lived a pretty girl with a pretty face
She was born not so long ago
With a twinkle in her eye and in her hair a bow
She was a pretty little baby when she was asleep
Her mother couldn’t take care of this pretty girl
They already had one four year old girl
So when she first felt her kick it made her head swirl
She got bigger with each passing day
And the man she obeyed strayed In her bed his head lay
She started crying and anger she then knew
But she got a gun she knew what to do
The man started laughing, what’s that going to do baby
You not going to shoot you know you still love me
Then with tears in her eyes, her hands on the trigger
She said oh yeah ,how do you figure
But before he could answer I went for the gun
Bang
The gun went off with a slip of the thumb
And then her whole body begin to go numb
Now in the hospital and under the knife
He had to choose between his baby and wife
So his baby was born but her mother was dead
Daddy’s little girl was all that was said
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What a sad, sad story! I agree with David that it needs some structuring. Perhaps this would be better as a short story? But the emotion is certainly there.
This is an incredibly sad story. I agree with Roger, however, and I believe this could be even better with a little work.
I think it needs some punctuation and the spelling errors need fixing. Also a decision should be made regarding the rhyme and meter. Sometimes the poem rhymes, at other times it doesn't.
A little editing and this write will be fantastic.