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I think of you.
by Anna Tkachenko
copyright 09-08-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
When I open my eyes
To see the sun rise
I think of you.


When I feel the summer heat
On the sand beneath my feet
I think of you.


When I sit on a beach
Another world just out of reach
I think of you.

When I see the colored leaves
Fall to the ground from a light breeze
I think of you.

When I look to the night sky
And see the sparkle like in your eyes
I think of you.

When the snow is coming down
To softly blanket the ground
I think of you.

When I go to bed at night
As I turn out the light
I think of you.

When I'm old and near death
And I draw my last breath
I'll think of you.


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09-08-2005 Roger Crique    

The mood in this poem is serene and peaceful. You have crafted your sentences very nicely. There are some beautiful lines in this poem. when I read them, I was transported to a place where only love can grow and these line are:
"When I open my eyes To see the sun rise I think of you."

"When I see the colored leaves Fall to the ground from a light breeze I think of you."
and "When I go to bed at night As I turn out the light I think of you." and then you ended with a bang! "When I'm old and near death And I draw my last breath I'll think of you." This line pulls the whole poem together and gives it the final push toward being a very good poem. I'll give you five stars, for your imagery, sentence structure, theme and the wonderful fluidity the poem contains.
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